Monday, October 1, 2012

Sweet Arrival


I've ever felt a closeness
To something unspeakably good.
A presence that, without moving at all,
Beats me to my arrival.
But not goading as a competitor,
Or gloating as one so much better,
He drops sweet petals,
Airs the place,
And dispels the shadows alone.

Then he waits for the likes of me.

It makes me wonder
How I can turn so easily,
And even consider something so temporary,
And so lacking.

-jenn long

1 comment:

  1. This is such a perfect poem
    It calls out for
    deserves
    requires
    The perfect poetic reply
    The first is too awkward
    Delete
    The second too obvious
    More than a little trite
    Delete
    Next, a little humor
    It’s misplaced
    Delete
    Soon the trash basket overflows
    My words inadequate for the task
    I surrender the page
    Weave a basket
    Visit Monet’s garden
    Gather timeless blossoms
    Select sensuous Georgia O’Keeffe buds
    Flowering in exquisite color in the desert of New Mexico
    Accept tall and slender calla lilies
    Offered by Diego Rivera himself
    Explore the meadows of Persephone’s abduction
    Craft a garland of the bounty of primordial spring
    Find a Delphic laurel branch
    And in the golden light of sunset
    Pick mythic apples of the Hesperides
    And with these tokens
    Simple notions
    Spread petals at your feet

    David Trudel

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